“Well, at least you got out of it. You corrected your mistake.”
“That marriage wasn’t a mistake,” Jane says.
The counselor raises her eyebrows.” Oppression, abuse…how was it not a mistake to marry a man like that? Not that I’m blaming you. You couldn’t have known.”
“Our daughter,” Jane says. “Only he and I together could have made that wonderful human being. Without him, I wouldn’t have her. She’s the fireweed that redeems it all.”
“Your daughter? Didn’t know you had a daughter. Where is she?”
Jane looks at the floor, silent. That’s a volcano all its own.

Every week, Charli Mills hosts a flash fiction challenge at the Ranch. This week’s prompt: “In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes fireweed. You can use it as the plant, a flower, a metaphor or as the name of someone or something. Go where the prompt leads. Burn bright when you write.”
Loved how you ended the flash, Deborah!
Very poignant!
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Sometimes the children are the best things about a union.
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That one came from personal experience. 😉
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I’ve seen the same. 🙂
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Great flash. And there’s more… Into the volcano next?
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Back story is being very back-story-ish.
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The volcanoes are the most powerful earth builders. And yet even there fireweed can grow!
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Awesome, right? I love volcanoes and fireweed both. Great prompt this week.
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I hadn’t thought of volcanoes. Glad you went there!
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That really spoke to me. Well done.
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Thank you!
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